Whenever I go to sleep,
After the sun has went down on the horizon,
Before the rooster crows in the morning,
As I dream of many dreams,
I hope tomorrow will be as good as it was toda
When I wake up next morning,
As I stretched my restless body,
I see the sun rise out my window,
As I get ready for today,
I feel like today is a new day.
Monday, December 6, 2010
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top parapraph last word was not finish (today.)
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I really enjoyed reading your poem it was great.
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10/10 Awsome (today) not toda
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